Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as the older houses in an area Others believe that the government should allow people to build houses in the style they want Discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay topics:

Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as the older houses in an area. Others believe that the government should allow people to build houses in the style they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The architecture design has always been an option for conveying the background of the particular place. Proceeding from this some people reckon that new buildings are to be constructed for maintaining the general style of the district while their opponents claim that the buildings should follow an individual styling. I am convinced that the buildings' shape should be dictated by the owner's will due to the reasons marked here and after.
To commence with, creating unque constructions is certainly to be a boon for attracting tourists. Exotic houses may be considered unusual enough to draw the people's attention all across the globe. Therefore, the increase in the tourist industry will boost the local economy which is beneficial for the citizens. For example, Madrid's cultural Center named Caixa Forum draws a plethora of foreigners to the country due to the creative design. Thus, people OUGHT to be allowed to frame buildings according to their wishes which could become a new showplace .
Although an opinion exists that all edifices need to be shaped in one style for keeping the image of the place, I doubt this point of view. I believe that people should possess an opportunity for self expression in architecture representing the changes in nation's character. Various buildings' styles reflect changing of the background of the place retelling the history of forming the city. Therefore, artificial maintenance of one style may be seen as a tool for eradicating historical transportations. For instance, according to a famous Russian scientist Kim v I, unique buildings later become cultural sites that deliver the ideas that used to be popular. Thereby, creating peculiar constructions should never be prohibited as they mirror unique outlook in the form of the architecture of the locals.
To sum up, even though maintaining the place's image through law restrictions seem to be appealing, such an option is objectionable. People should be able to build the houses they long for which is welfare for the tourist aspect and as a tool for expressing themselves.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21556886228 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92320053347 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3786384568 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271783538932 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880298694278 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065199219098 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174524197963 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028770460033 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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