Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today’s world demands well-educated and good mannered community members. For this reason, some people argue that parents should play an important role in bringing up such kind of people, while others think schools are the best place to raise good behaved members of society. In my point of view both family members and education establishments equally impact on youths’ finding their places in society.
From early ages children start to imitate their parents’ actions and most of them see their heroes on the family members. By this I mean, the ones who brought up in the family in which members are educated and well-behaved, try to be like their fathers or mothers by setting future plans and aims from their childhood. For example, there is great difference between child whose parents always quarrel or father drinks alcohol and do not work and another child whose mother cares about his behavior and father interests daily education progress of him. Parents also teach their children to obey rules and respect others which are very important manners of a good person in society.
On the other hand schools are the best places to gain communicative skills because they face their counterparts with various characters here. As a result children acquire some skills which will help them to find their places in community in the future. Moreover, pupils make their future job decisions with the help of teachers at schools.
To conclude, up to my point, both parents and school are responsible equally for the future position of a child in society. If family plays its role as an educator of behavior properly, children can learn at school how to communicate and socialize with others. As a result one good behaved and educated member of government is brought up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, i mean, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05762711864 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58403380025 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0370316596 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242499050748 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874082137784 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650778187285 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154430926109 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738270733061 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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