Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is undeniable that forming an accomplished citizen needs both family and teachers involvement which leads to a continuous debate of who take more responsibilities for this. From my perspectives, education from schools and parents shares the complementary vital values in this issue. Hence, this essay will clarify some advantages of parental instructions that teacher can not provide and vice versa.
First and foremost, families play a crucial role in bringing up children both physically and mentally as well as penetrate them basic conception and good calibre. Their offsprings need strictly teaching about the right behavior in family particularly and in society generally which would be more straightforward taking between members than in jam-packed classes. Furthermore, homeschooling will be an ideal tool to pass down the tradition, a way to evoke students' ethnic pride, patriotism and help them perceive their hometown more and more. For instance, coastal family usually instructs and share experiences to their children about the sea areas and how to take up the seafood-related work, therefore it raises the enthusiasm and perseverance for them to pursue the tradition. Parents and other members nurture the inside human of each students that proved for the significance of initial education.
On the other hand, aside from having beautiful soul, knowledges and social skills are of paramount importance in judging a potential civil. Apparently, school with the congruous academic methods and environments would handle them better. Rigorous curriculums can train the student's patience, confidence and teamwork morale - three essentials requires in either future work or society. What's more, teacher provides a great number of chances for their children to broaden horizons and learn out of family extent such as cooperating with many internship offerings from companies or just getting acquainted to other cultures all over the world. Thus, experiences in outside environments would totally differ from those given by the home education.
To sum up, both parents and schools are necessary ingredients of perfect training recipes and any lack of one of them can not be balanced by the another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56176470588 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96471511173 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2936980744 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.071428571 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141882097646 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466443897687 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301313568252 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880198473277 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278770660231 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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