Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however, believe
that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Over the last decade, there has been much debate on the issue of whether parents ought to teach their children how
to be a good citizen in society or schools have the main responsibility. I will discuss the controversial aspects of that
throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the family is the first society that a child starts to learn and grow in it, so parents are the initial mentors of their children. Many argued that parents should teach the moral factors during the child's formative years,
regarding the fact that parents' behavior and guidance has a profound influence on an infant's attitude. Apart from this,
mothers and fathers have the responsibility to care for their children, and a rebellion child can do many awful misdeeds
that not only harm the society but also it will cause many problems for parents.
Many individuals own the view that schools are the place that ought to teach children how to behave appropriately in society.
Regarding the educational perspective, students' social attitudes formed during education years by their classmates and
teachers, as a result, schools play a pivotal role in teaching the social behaviors to children. Besides, parents may are the primary mentors, but most are not professional and up to date about educational methods, so usually have a major
issue in teaching matters to their children. However, professional teachers in schools can be a great mentor in terms of
social acts and ethical attitudes.
To conclude, although there is a contentious discussion on teaching children to be good at society, and many assumed
parents are the only appropriate choice, I take the view that schools and educational system should also be responsible for this issue.
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Suggestion: infants'; infant's
...guidance has a profound influence on an infants attitude. Apart from this, mothers and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, may, regarding, so, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17957746479 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79947736146 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1774388251 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.1 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280048448218 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117842303691 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680816124144 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969153787856 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658455286606 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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