Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views
Parents are often viewed as best mentor for children to make them a good citizen whereas other disapprove it. They believe that it is the responsibility of the teachers to teach the children how to act as perfect member of the community. In my opinion both teachers and parents are responsible for grooming the child, however parents should play a greater role than teacher in this aspect.
Parents are the role model to their children. Kids tend to copy their parents act and behaviour. Therefore, parent’s attitude and relation with children influence largely on the development of personality and character of their children. Parents can easily impart good thought into their children through their good act. For example, if parents follow the law in day to day life activities, that also disseminate into their children to be a law abiding citizen. Moreover, children learn life lesion without fear from their parents. Parents have the opportunity to take corrective measures of any wrong doing by their children as kids spend most of the time with parents out of school.
On the other hand, some argue that academic institute like school has a greater role to teach the children how to ordeal. Children are governed by a prototype guideline in the school that help them the learn discipline beside academic lesson. Teachers play a crucial role in navigating student’s negative idea and thought into positive channel, so that they grow up as good citizen. However, it may not possible to pay equal attention to each student to rectify his or her bad ideas. In addition teachers are often unaware of the student’s family atmosphere, cultural values and constrains, those parameter act as catalyst to a good member of the society.
In conclusion, both parents and teacher play an important role in helping the children to be a good member of the society, however parent should take a greater responsibility than the teacher to make their children a good citizen.
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... make their children a good citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11314984709 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75742640648 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510703363914 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0013162176 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31466266906 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108101055672 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580897622459 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206576470056 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041498031781 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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