Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that children should be raised only at home to grow up as a good person while a number of people believe that learning at school is enough for children, I would argue that it is better to mix both home and school education.

On the one hand, home is a place where family members can encourage their children knowledge about everything happens around them. Firstly, kids spend most of their time with their parents, so, obviously, they easily make many different kind of questions such as the environment, animals, trees and so on. Therefore, father and mother or any members of the family can show them how to become a well- behaved children so that they could build their personal character correctly. Furthermore, parents always want the best thing to happen in their kids life, thus, they will make sure that they give the best advice or lessons to help the children establish their fundamental social awareness. However, some parents does not always give the most satisfactory answer, hence, it may cause severe misunderstanding unnecessarily for children knowledge.

On the other hand, I strongly believe that teacher is enough qualified to teach children properly. Based on the educational curriculum, children can have an opportunity to broaden their awareness about many interesting things, not only know how to solve mathematics problems but also social issues. For example, after attending an environmental lecture at school, my 10 years old brother came home, excitedly told me to put trash in the dustbin instead of littering unconsciously. Despite the benefits learning with teachers, time for attending school is limited so they might not get enough essential information for their life.

In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to combine educating children both by parents and by school.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...arents, so, obviously, they easily make many different kind of questions such as the environme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15032679739 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76191549415 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3017655468 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8181818182 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222094542313 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849917137123 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645789437578 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14980040891 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522673216829 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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