Opinions are divided as to children should be taught to live in society properly by their parents or it is a school where they should be enlightened. Despite the fact that parents are the role model for their child, I believe school also can make a significant development for our children.
Normally, we can see a considerable similarity between children and their parents in term of behaviors, habits and careers. This means parents are importance for children development. Generally, in the first 3 years, babies gradually copy personalities from their mother and father because it is likely that they stick together almost whole day and they are only the person who has contract with their babies. So that, fathers and mothers should teach the right things to their children as much as possible, for example, polite speaking, moral thinking and everyday learning. Otherwise, we can see from many orphans having a huge trouble in our society, some one ends up in jail as a criminal as they did not have anyone to follow once they were young.
Later on, in children age 4-15, majority of children will be good or not depending on their friends. They have duties to attend school 5 days a week, this makes a huge change in children development since they contact to friends and teachers like every day. However, it is teachers who is importance for these age kids, teachers have a big influence for keeping children to have the right attitudes. So that the outcome of children come from a school direction, for instance, if students have problem like ethics or morals, school staffs can evaluate the issue and teach them specifically before they are bigger issue in the future.
In conclusion, both parents and schools are really importance to make our children be a good citizen. Without one can lead to problem in society easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91025641026 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58716392209 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6368602146 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209937684498 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880036729014 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636667838502 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147368314276 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374969151935 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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