Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this world, parents and teachers are two underlying role models for children in how they behave. While some people believe that it is responsibility of parents, others contend that learning process in effort being benevolent member of society is from teachers. In response to this matter, this essay will explicate the both views and my own opinion.
Firstly, parents should guide their children to socialize because of children's time. In this case, we deliberate that children's time is majorly in their parent environment. In my apropos experience, I commenced meeting my parent from early morning until I slept. As a result, parents responsible to invite their children in some social activities in their milieu. Furthermore, it is piquant to note that children often initiate parents' habit. Psychologically, in early life of someone, they will imitate a person who is in their day.
Secondly, schools provide a wide range of lesson for their students in many sides of life comprising socialization. Indonesian students, for instance, are taught same subjects namely civics and religion. Studying the both courses eugenders them understand platonically related to how to be ideal member of community. Logically, if a student can pass an exam in the particular subject, it will be a guarantee that they understand the matter.
In my opinion, the amalgamation either family or school tends to meet better outcome than separation of both of them. Practically, when pupils get information from schools, they are able to practice the matter that is guided by their parent. It seems plausible for children can be a great member of society ig the two espousing factor work together.
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Essay evaluation report
it is responsibility of parents,
it is the responsibility of parents,
parents responsible to invite their children in some social activities in their milieu.
parents are responsible to invite their children in some social activities in their milieu.
a wide range of lesson
a wide range of lessons
the amalgamation either family or school tends to meet
the amalgamation of either family or school tends to meet
It seems plausible for children can be a great member
It seems plausible for children to be a great member
Sentence: Studying the both courses eugenders them understand platonically related to how to be ideal member of community.
Error: eugenders Suggestion: engenders
Error: platonically Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It seems plausible for children can be a great member of society ig the two espousing factor work together.
Error: ig Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2 //read a good grammar book
Sentence Length SD: 3.561 7.5 //it means you had same writing styles for all sentences
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 271 350
No. of Characters: 1375 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.057 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.074 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.779 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.561 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... essay will explicate the both views and my own opinion. Firstly, parents shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23616236162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8903849641 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.7769967452 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257062752799 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806764908062 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547587710505 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155507241997 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741749631269 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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