Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some say that it is critical to have physical strength in order to succeed in sport, while others would argue that mental vitality is more necessary. This essay will argue that although having stable mentality could help make some wisest decisions, sport generally requires people to have good physical health so as to achieve success.
On the one hand, strong mentality maintains the emotion of sport competitors. It is indeed that there is invaribly circumtances where sportsperson become unaware as their heart rate is increasing or they lose concentration, because they are nervous or distracted by the crowd, especially at the peak of every competition. Hence, the necessity of mental strength is underlined by many people because it help them overcome those situation and bring differences to the game. For example, Djokovic is a tennis player who is well-known for his inner strength, he has managed to win various important matches although his technique is not very distinc from other players. Still, the psyological strength is not the key to success in sport because it only solves the lack of motivation or positive attitude in some precarious situation.
On the other hand, being physically strong means that you can dominate in any sport. It is inherently impossible for a sportperson to compete without a physical force, yet to be successful in sport. A healthy body will result in the ability to avoid sickness and speedy recovering, which are key factors in order to compete and achieve ambition in the long term. For example, many Asian football players are able to join Europe teams and play fairly, which was impossbile 10 years ago, because of the increase in physical strength such as height or stamina years by years. I believe this school of thought is preferable because a peak physical health can help reach even further achievement in sport.
In conclusion, although mental wellness is essential for the intensity of any sport, I believe it only helps in certain cases and the physical subtance is what makes a sport competitor become acknowledged and succesful
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1166180758 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74563756063 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583090379009 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.506328508 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282508925537 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969399841359 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618195315083 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166193679606 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568428277688 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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