some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adults punishments
In an era of ever-increasing crime rates, the idea of lowering punishment for teenage criminals has gained strong approval among people of concern. Much as I understand the reasons why such an idea is brought up, I believe that they fail to outweigh a plethora of plausible explanations for why it should not be enforced in real life.
First, dwindling the punishment based merely on a criminal’s age would appear as an incentive to teenage law-breakers. By this, I mean trying to make concessions for juvenile violators would only drive them closer to violating laws, for they are aware that they would be less severely punished due to their immaturity. As a result, this idea turns into an assurance of a lighter punishment for those who violate the laws at a young age.
Adding further, any act of lowering the punishment for juvenile law-breakers would show huge disrespect to the victim. Specifically, regardless of the criminal’s age, the loss that he or she has caused remains the same. With that being stated, it is morally right that they are objected to the same level of punishment as those who are older.
Granted, advocates for this idea state that juveniles should be given a lighter punishment because the crime they commit is purely a consequence of immaturity. Although this statement appears to be eminently rational, I stick to my point of view that the standard to which punishment is granted should be based on the crime per se in lieu of the criminal’s age.
In the light of the aforementioned discussion, I strongly believe that lawbreakers should be equally subjected to punishments of their crime for everyone is held responsible for their wrongdoings and that the loss caused by them remains the same regardless of their age.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, i mean, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99324324324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94680591217 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9068941717 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217345066996 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934056752216 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433003940116 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127040426795 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218281707729 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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