Adolescent are at a doorstep of completing thier education and entering the more practical world, hence many argue that financial management should be imbibed imto students from school itself. However, I agree that schools play ma major role in shaping students but parental guidance is equally important in guiding from regarding financial management.
School play a vit role in guiding students hence, it is important to guide the adolescent about how to save and manage money. It is extremely important to make students understand how to differentiate from the necessary and important bills and expense from the liesure expenses. Students should be taught from an young age to keep 10-20% of saving for emergency purposes such as hospitalisation or sudden laptop servicing/repairs etc. They should be made aware with different investment policies which can help them save money rather than overspending.
Furthermore, parents should also guide thier children beforehand as to how to save money. For instances, when parents go for grocery shopping, they should ask thier childrens to tag along. This can help teenagers understand how to spend money wisely.
To sum up, It is equally important for both schools and parents to teach thier children's from a young age on saving and managing money.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...garding financial management. School play a vit role in guiding students hence, i...
^^^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...xpenses. Students should be taught from an young age to keep 10-20% of saving for ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33495145631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8737413077 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.674377977 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22373986485 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941474413337 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378880695981 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138406935413 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056391487959 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...garding financial management. School play a vit role in guiding students hence, i...
^^^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...xpenses. Students should be taught from an young age to keep 10-20% of saving for ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33495145631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8737413077 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.674377977 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22373986485 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941474413337 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378880695981 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138406935413 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056391487959 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.