Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a heated debate on whether social skills play a pivotal role as academic qualifications do in one’s success. From my perspective, I am in favor of the idea and my reasons are as follows.
Admittedly, educational certificate is a must because it shows one’s academic background and professional experience in a certain field. It is a common process of employment to first seek a candidate with equivalent degree to the job requirement before the employer sets up an interview. With the globalization nowadays, some global companies require one with certain level of diploma, and as their initial judgment when there is no other references available. For example, my younger brother has applied for a job with an excellent engineering degree in IT, and he now got accepted to work for an international IT corporation in Japan for three years.
However, to climb a career ladder, one can not only be a master in the field but also needs some social skills to cope with problems at work. A person with sophisticated communication skills is able to comfort his or her colleagues, and is conscious enough to avoid the misunderstandings in the workplace. Furthermore, problem-solving skill is extremely useful when the conflicts happen. By contrast, if people do not know how to get along well with the others at work, they may experience a severe stress and anxiety. Having said that, social skills enrich their lives and give them best opportunities to face with any challenge at work.
In conclusion, although academic background is an unquestionable condition for people to find lucrative jobs, social skills are of great importance in their success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'them the best'.
Suggestion: them the best
...cial skills enrich their lives and give them best opportunities to face with any challeng...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13553113553 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20545681204 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2075752737 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161134772728 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618897806053 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599515323129 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116269758038 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585906885158 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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