Some people think that sports played in teams are better than individual sports others don't think . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports is very crucial part of human life. It is thought by some people team sports are beneficial for children rather than individual sports such as chess, golf and swimming. However others believe individual sports help to create intellectual mind. In my opinion, I believe that team sports have more interesting.
On the one hand, team mates learn to support each other to achieve a common goal. one team have s aim to win match, which is very beneficial for building cooperative skill. They try to do efforts with the help of each other. In addition to this, playing in a team gives children the opportunity to interact with others and get over their shyness. To illustrate, in football sport has two teams, each teams consists of maximum of 11 players.These team member have chance to communicate with each other and share their experience. Thus, in team sports children can get chance to learn cooperative skills at the same time interpersonal skill.
On the other hand, individual sports are better at teaching children to rely on their own skills and independent spirited. For example, in chess teenagers make their decision own level and win trophy with their own efforts. This habit give assistance to take prominent decision in life. Moreover, in individual sports provide more chances to engage children with parents. A few spots such as tennis, chess child can play with their parents, which is good for build strong relation between child and guardians.
Finally I believe that, children generally have more fun when they engage in an activity with their peers rather than on their own team.
In conclusion, both sports are important for child overall development, but team sports teach children patience, communication and cooperative skills, which more beneficial for child future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13559322034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6322945186 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2483406398 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1176470588 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25720261458 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980499804338 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686355457334 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154539961141 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941611713946 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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