Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
According to the statement, most of the individuals consider that proliferation of international companies and globalisation give rise to positive conclusion. I completely agree with the statement and reasons are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, technology become too vast due to which tha rank of all sectors increase day to day. Similarly, foreign companies and globalisation is growing with higher proportion which leads to many advantageous aspects. In this criteria, when national companies are set jb the nation of one another then this leads to path of their promotion and also increase the probability of employment for unemployed. Because, when more count of companies are set in the nation of one another then their bondings become well built with all aspects. Therefore, this also shows a great opportunity for unemployed to get desirable job and wages. Because, more number of companies lead to more number of employees for work.
In addition, globalisation is the another way of development in their all sectors and economy for all nations. In this criteria, if legal authorities are passed information regarding any aspect with foreign nations. This leads to their progression and for another nation to. For instance, GM crops which are stands for genetically modified crops, these are the major part which comes in front from globalisation. By this criteria, farmers are able to modify their crops with superior quality seeds and also shows higher proportion in their yielding to. Due to this method, farmers become skilfull to protect their crops from contamination. Therefore, this shows positive aspect for agronomist and their nation to, which leads to their progression.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, the spread of foreign companies and globalisation shows positive impression in such manners as business and employment opportunities, progression in economy and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07961566061 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494983277592 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8810284715 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146635078902 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571121297235 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341376389007 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108698166011 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407229331541 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.