Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In today's paradigm,plethora of folks ruminate that proliferate chain of multinational companies and globalization is beneficial for masses and environment.I believe that it has both pros and cons for an individual and environment. This essay will examine the boon and baan of wide spread of multinational companies.
To begin with,there are multifarious merits of these companies but the chief among them is it eliminate the prominent issue of unemployment as these firms need both skilled and unskilled workers subsequently,it curb the poverty line and umpteen people able to run their livelihood smoothly.Moreover,it allow vast number of choices with a high quality products which has very reasonable price which is affordable by everyone due to surged in completion between the multinational entrepreneurs in order to enhance their Goodwill and profit too.To examplify, it is surveyed by international community that exaggreated 90%of multinational companies sell goods and services at reliable price to incline thier prestige and run their business without thorns.
However,with regard to an environment it had numerous detrimental effects .As a point,it contaminate the environment because they not only release toxic gases but also but also drain harmful chemical into rivers without treating them in laboratory therefore,it leads to numerous health issues to the locals and depleting the ozone layer.Apart from that, an exploitation of loabours are done by big industries because they pay less remmuneration to them in terms of wages and acquire more work proportion .also they do not charged them any kind of extra pelf for their extra working hours .
In conclusion,although,spread of big companies worldwide aid in the development of country as they contribute in nation's GDP but they need to follow all ethics of business as they are part of this society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5331010453 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48298332461 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641114982578 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 254.045665186 49.4020404114 514% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 317.6 106.682146367 298% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.4 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8 7.06120827912 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149717568586 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08004963354 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357631363959 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857174241252 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486049361681 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.3 13.0946893788 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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