Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education is an essential part of life. Every citizen has two choice to get knowledge. First is public school and second is private school. There are divided opinion on the topic that pupils have chance to get more benefit in study of their curriculum from private secondary schools. Some people readily comply with this view. Others argue opposite that society can get bad effects because of private schools. Ahead of my inclination both views should be analysed further.
Explaining the former view, the primary argument the support would like to put forward is that private provide individual attention on every child. What I mean that primary schools offer smaller classroom size and one teacher for every class. Thus, teacher know weakness of every pupil and force them to do more work to overcome that weak point. Additionally, private school gives best facility and provide extra curriculum programs for getting higher education. For example, in private school every class have digital board. Teachers show video of practical activity which helpful for students to understand theory quickly. Moreover, private school arrange unique sport competition which make children strong physically. What Next, there is less nuisance of violence on the campus of private schools.
On the flip side, counter arguer feels that there are ample cons of the primary schools. The foremost one is that authorities had established schools to increase revenue of their own. That’s why they charge heavy tuition fees to get admission in their school. Poor class of the society does not have ability to pay high fees. Furthermore, students can not give their full efforts on their syllabus because more sports activity.
To conclude with my opinion, I tend to believe that these schools are very expensive and they constantly increase the gap between the rich and poor. The children who come from affluent backgrounds can afford these schools and get quality education. I think they should decrease fees scale which help to poor students in acquiring knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'gives the best'.
Suggestion: gives the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26443768997 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42949375914 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607902735562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4029647345 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3043478261 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3043478261 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314782208861 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788677437672 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592310284976 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176989248549 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813684452642 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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