Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that endeavors and perseverance are the backbones of success, while others think that wealth and appearance as the deciding factor of success. In my view, I regard hard work and determination as the vital part leading to success, however other factors are unreliable and not positive.
In the first place, hard work lays a solid groundwork for success. Not only because hard work means a good attitude, but also because without hard work as the basis, even a genius cannot bring his/her talents into play, so does the proficiency of a genius. Specifically, a person with astonishingly high language talent cannot command a language without the early stage of reciting vocabulary. However, there certainly are some drawbacks to brute-force hard work, in which case it is very inefficient, tiring and stressful. But hard work with a couple of smart tricks does lead to a huge difference and accomplishments.
On the other hand, money and appearance are what we call 'good fortune'. Admittedly, some lucky people do become rich or famous overnight through appearance, gift or luck, with less chequered careers than those who work hard. However, the reality is, to give an example, even a pretty, charming celebrity still has to work extremely hard in a highly competitive industry where other celebrities are equally beautiful or charming. As a result, these factors are temporary, unreliable and speculative, although surely they add bonus to hard work.
To conclude, the significance of working hard exceeds that of having money and appearance. Without the most fundamental groundwork, namely endeavors, having money and appearance would only be meaningless. Therefore, I strongly recommend people to be less cleverish and speculative but more down-to-earth, diligent and industrious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to, as a result, in my view, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3838028169 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01008974118 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1695034434 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317791539828 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105040579786 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748638022246 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198004447189 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103960543055 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.