Some people think that teach people should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place of learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Numerous people perceive that teaching the youngster how to be an ideal member of society is mainly parent responsibility, but others argue that the educational institution is the place where the children should be educated about it. This essay will address basic social skills as family responsibility to educate young people and a mandatory subject in the school as part of the school responsible owing to how to be a good member of the community.
Family is the first school for the child. this means that the youngster learns the basic knowledge for a living is from a family member. Parents have the responsibility to train their children regarding social insight requiring for the living in the community. Attitude and good behavior, for instance, supposed to be taught in the family rather than in the school. Because, if this knowledge is educated in school, that would be late as a youngster starts to attend school mostly at 6 years old, whereas social knowledge should be accustomed since the children in the early age.
On the other hand, school is responsible to train children how to be a better member of society due to the fact that the main purpose of the school is to educate people. Every level of school in Indonesia, for example, has an attitude subject which is a mandatory subject. The student is educated on how to be a better person, how to speak politely and how to interact with the people who are younger, have similar age and to the older people. Moreover, school is believed as an ideal place to train children about this subject because most of the children spent more time in school rather than at home. Consequently, the teachers have sufficient time to train the children compare to the parents.
To conclude, I believe that both parent and school have similar responsibility in term of teaching the young people how to become a well-mannered in the community, but the parent should start educating the young people about manner since an early age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'parented'.
...be an ideal member of society is mainly parent responsibility, but others argue that t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...mily is the first school for the child. this means that the youngster learns the bas...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87647058824 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67637362462 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432352941176 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7181990557 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294280277174 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110196299801 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645995885032 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201347494338 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481064551188 0.056905535591 85% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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