Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people s lives Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Happiness is the ultimate goal of human life. Everything that a man strives for is to live in a state of bliss. Some are of the understanding that youth is the prime time of life where one is most joyous, while others believe that despite the added responsibilities in life, adulthood adds more meaning to life. I believe that ageing gracefully with all the pressures of life gives a sense of accomplishment coupled with happiness that cannot be expressed in words.

The euphoria of the youth is explainable. They live a life with no cares in the world, in a state of glee. The youngsters are not accountable for the lives of others and therefore are let to fulfill their own desires. For instance, we see a lot of teenagers visiting clubs and theaters, this is because they have all the time in the world and zero commitments. They are vibrant, full of life and dare to achieve. It is therefore refreshing to see the gaiety and dauntlessness of the youth which makes them ecstatic.

Growing old is not easy; however it ushers in wisdom and contentedness. The happiness that a man experiences in the mundane things of life is a sign of maturity. An individual becoming exuberant with a hike in salary, a promotion at work, the first words of a grandchild, the doctor’s medical statement of a good prognosis of loved one, are few examples.

In my opinion, I believe that there is no greater joy than reaping the fruits of our own labour, when we are well advanced in age. I daresay, grey hair is indeed an ornament to man because it denotes the toils and the struggles one faces to achieve happiness

Votes
Average: 10 (3 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65384615385 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8449186337 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9419218248 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12689340827 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355286729618 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400362485732 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068284135422 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379561357197 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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