Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It has been a subject of controversy the impact education received at home or school had on children’s growth. While some believe that home based learning provides a safe environment and opportunities for family bonding, schools, in turn prepare children to face the grim realities of life and inculcate values. Ultimately, I believe that schools offer better learning experience than being tutored at home.
Home-schooling fosters familial love, care and protection. Being educated at home has its allowances like a nonthreatening environment from bullying, bad company and other malpractices like cheating and stealing. In addition to that, the child is not intimidated and has no added pressure but can silently work towards its own goal. For instance, Madame Curie, the woman who invented ‘Radium’ was home-schooled. The only catch was that she was a social introvert.
On the other hand, receiving a formal education has its own perks. Regular classroom teaching equips the young minds to face challenges and develop coping mechanisms. It also fosters in them virtues like sharing, caring, team spirit, gratitude and unity. For example, A recent survey revealed that 96% of the students who were formally educated were psychological sound when compared to 36% of their counterparts who received customized education at home.
In conclusion, despite the comfort and the warmth of a secure environment at home, developing into a physically, mentally and emotionally sound individual is possible only when one is educated in an institution. I concur this is the safest and the best way for individuals to stand out in the years to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...ieve that schools offer better learning experience than being tutored at home. Home-sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40384615385 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14590698674 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.678213544 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251574378584 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772449571594 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510384178314 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144416181038 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577346671834 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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