Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether essential measures should be applied to control noise. While many individuals think that they have the freedom to make noise if they want, I believe that it would be better to reduce noise.
On the one hand, many people think that they have the right to make noise as they want for several reasons. First, people feel more comfortable and free when creating sounds while working or amusementing. For instance, turning the volume louder to enjoy music make them feel relaxed after a long day of work, although this may disturb their next-door neighbours. Second, a lot of people often consider noise as a part of the industrialization and modernization process, therefore this is inevitable. This means that traffic sounds or engine noise are likely to become more familiar to urban citizens. Therefore, they feel that there is no specific reason to must control noise.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial if setting strict rules to manage noise. Firstly, noise has negative impacts on human health. For examples, some my friends can not sleep at night only because of intrusive sounds from a nearby industrial zone. This means that if this situation lasts, it leads to a deterioration in people’s mental and physical health. In addition, work productivity may be decreased by noise. A lot of white-collar workers say that they can not focus on their work as a consequence of sounds which are generated ceaselessly from several means of transport on road.
In conclusion, although many people still insist on making a lot of noise without any consideration for others, I believe that noise should be limited to have a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'applied'?
Suggestion: applied
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Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
... means that if this situation lasts, it lead to a deterioration in people's men...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'several means'.
Suggestion: several means
...ds which are generated ceaselessly from several means of transport on road. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00704225352 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74855465074 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8035380002 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308481231712 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995496604335 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08984687273 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198415929219 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970270485725 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.