some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher Others think that it is always better to have a teacher Which one do you prefer

Essay topics:

some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which one do you prefer.

It is often believed by few individuals that self study is propitious rather than having a teacher, however, others oppose it. I am personally choosing study by own and this essay will highlight that why this approach is appropriate because of few reasons such as saving money, time and boundary of knowledge.

To begin with, even though there are myriad of reasons but the most prime reason is saving money and time. To elucidate it, people pay a lot of their money to teachers to learn what they want and instructors set a particular schedule to teach them. Because of this, they have to left their work to learn anything. If humans had learnt by themselves then folks would have saved their time and money as well. For instance, a survey has conducted by the regime of Russia which shows that 80% of employees was qualified for their job by doing study by themselves in their student life. Thus, self-study is good for everyone.

Strolling further, broad boundary of knowledge in case of doing study by self. To explicate it, human being is not dependent on another person to learn something and do not get same knowledge as teacher have.Moreover, they read books and search on internet about any topic and get plethora of knowledgeable material which is not only beneficial for them but also brings tremendous change in their thinking process. Because teachers do not know about choices of every student, sometimes they are failed to understand them and unsuccessful to clear doubts in which they have minimum knowledge.

To conclude that although teacher is necessary to learn basics of life, in the later life people do not have needs to rely on any person to get knowledge.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... not get same knowledge as teacher have.Moreover, they read books and search on internet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for instance, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84775086505 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57560339215 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2190826016 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241098732839 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850545800149 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596859492788 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142316458653 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433002454634 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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