Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often believed by folks that to overcome noise there should be some strong policies that needs to be impliment. While others oppose it. This essay will highlight that why people have two different phases about this trend and I will give my opinion at the end after discussion.
To commence with the former view, even though there are myriad of reasons behind this approach but the mos prime reason is noise pollution. To elucidate it, excessive noise develop plethora of health issues in the humans like hearing, heart diseases and also damage ear drum. Moreover, high pitch volume not only effect ear but also put catastrophic impact on the brain activity that cause unstable mental health. For instance, near the hospitals and schools where people are suffering from various kind of illnesses and children are studying respectively, high volume of of horns and music are very dangerous for them. If government had introduced strict laws about noise then individuals would not have hearing and heart problems. Therefore, regime should implement strict law and regulations to control noise.
On the flipside, music is a backbone of every enjoyable occasions such as marriage party, sports events and so on. To explicate it, every person wants to celebrate their functions with music, dance and drinks because it is about the moment of happiness and make it rememberable. Apart from this, there are other soundproof equipments which can be used in areas where noise should be allowed like music concerts, sports stadiums so that individuals can enjoy the cheerful moment. With this technique no one will disturb.
To conclude, although noise can cause some serious health issues, we cannot ban noise. In my perception on some places music should be allowed but restricted in public and dwelling places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14527027027 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48927346381 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7847881573 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227456848079 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687192397248 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516770395492 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138175620005 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378191085077 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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