Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Paying taxes to the government is a pervasive scenario in most of the nations around the world. However, it is often argued that it is unnecessary to pay tax to the country. In my view, I completely disagree with the given statement and I believe paying taxes to the state is fundamental to the country. My opinion would be explicated in the following paragraphs.

It is essential to pay taxes to the government due to the fact that it enables the authorities to maintain and provide more satisfactory living for the citizens. Without insufficient funding, the government are incapable of maintaining the quality of human daily lives or even raising the living quality. Public service such as transportation is a case in point─The government in need of sufficient money to structure or renew the transport system. It is also interesting to note that the government distribute large proportion of national budget on the maintenance of water supply system. Among these are indispensable to the human beings and people usually depend on. Hence, paying taxes is vitally important.

Apart from that, paying taxes is conducive to the education, which could foster more competent students, and therefore, enhance the national competitiveness. In order to cultivate adequate students with exceptional capabilities, the government requires abundant funding to provide useful and educational resources for the higher education. For instance, in terms of scientific field, students in need of laboratory with sophisticated apparatus to conduct the researches and experiment. In this way, students could sharpen their professional skills taking advantage of these resources.

All in all, I reiterate my opinion as argued above. I am convinced that paying taxes to the state is pivotal because it could maintain our living standards and cultivate more remarkable students.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43642611684 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12682676499 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2096238286 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137614342267 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489615500788 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455921413016 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914550426271 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459227997086 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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