Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
Some individuals believe that youth should be required to participate in community service activities. I consider that it is more likely to have long-term rewards for their lives without many drawbacks.
On the one hand, volunteering provides the opportunity for individuals to connect with their community and contribute to making it a better place. Helping elderly people with social projects. This allows you to feel a sense of purpose and fulfilment knowing you're helping others and inspiring change. For example, when racism and homophobia are in people's lives, social workers inspire individuals to see the problems and help them solve them.
Additionally, as a social worker, each day is filled with unique challenges and surprises, ensuring that boredom is never a part of your routine. Every case you encounter can lead to new opportunities and experiences. Your day will always be exciting because it will never be the same. Helping others in difficult times improves their emotions and makes them a better person. And with that, you will also have an optimistic attitude, which will help you reduce stress and improve your weaknesses.
Thus, unpaid work to help people brings a lot of benefits to each person. Juveniles can use these jobs to develop themselves in the future. The government launches volunteer programmes to help juveniles have more experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...sense of purpose and fulfilment knowing youre helping others and inspiring change. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32876712329 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79732452516 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.169713191 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3571428571 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180665705617 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654373799616 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784089068639 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110922627634 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042640538253 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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