Nowadays, people have different thinking about the topic that I will talk about it today. The first option that they say is that students who have finished high school should go to university to complete their education and take more knowledge about what they want to be in the future but on the other hand, people say that the student must work after finishing school to earn money and get practical experience And life. Now I will talk about this topic but if you ask me about which option I agree to, I will choose the first.
First, I will talk about why most students complete their studies at university.They have to do it because if we want to develop our country.I think the first reason that will lead to the success of our country is that the people who live in it have learned and this can be taken at the university if the doctors get a good education, then they will reduce the diseases in the country by prescription or treating people.Or other professions such as engineers,teachers,etc...
Second, students who do not complete college may not have enough money to complete their education.I know someone who did not complete his education because he was the only one who cared about his family, so he had to drop out and start work.This way you can take practical experience.But sometimes they can not find a job quickly because business managers want the person who completed the study.
In conclusion, students who complete their education will have many job opportunities to develop themselves and their country in particular.Others will gain experience and work experience.Therefore, we can take practical advice from them.In the end, I advise all of you to complete your education for our country, because we should not prevent our country from developing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72204472843 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5069419623 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517571884984 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6014612495 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163103208343 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553136483657 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502301301978 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105676193081 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466606835453 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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