Today we are in the 21st-century life become easier than before, in the 1970s or 1980s which our parents' birth was complicated to live so, I think I will not be able to bear their life. Because of lots of factors, I will mention part of them in this argument.
The main reason why today is easier is medical care. Lots of hospitals and the medical care centres are building due to a gradual decrease in death revenge according to the statistics. And medicine is developing to destroy some dangerous diseases. And the search still working to eliminate more diseases. On the other hand, in the 20th century, was the opportunity to sick with the dangerous diseases low. Because of a lot of products that we are using them can have a negative effect on our health.
Secondly, now women have the opportunity to educate whereas in past was the house and the children caring their only responsibility. And if the woman has a good job that will help their kids in their study. Also, today we are seeing the modern vehicles; cars, buses, in the street. And now we can transport by plane to travel to long distances while in the past they must use the camels or horses to travel and that will take days or months to arrive.
At the end of the argument, we must not forget the great technology' invention is the Internet which can talk with any person in any country and can make a search for any subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o sick with the dangerous diseases low. Because of a lot of products that we are using ...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and can make a search for any subject.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54901960784 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43441934338 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9548273182 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2307692308 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1897735329 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534271369249 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897926846918 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998871746614 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896993081828 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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