Some people believe that working in the same companies until retirement is the best for your life while others think that changing their job is a better way to achieve the goal. In the following paragraph, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
Working at the same organization is easy for people who do not want to find a new job. Your position will be promoted step by step depends on company structure, estimated by your manager or your performance. However, some of them struggle with their work life, for instance, some people have a conflict with their boss so it may affect to their position and salary. In other words, if you resist to work in the same for a long time although you do not satisfy with your job details and environments. It becomes an initial cause to other problem in which harsh to your health.
In the other hand, when you realize that you do not please with you job whether your manager habit and your colleagues or characteristic of your work, deciding to change the job position tend to make your life better. Not only for increasing your based salary but also reduce a upcoming health problem. Moreover, working in different organization is challenge you to improve your skills, talents and knowledge, as well as broaden your horizon to look at the overview of the work.
In conclusion, it can be emphasized that despite these two opinions on the best way to get a good work between working at the same organization or different. It still be very personal question for people who work in the same position. Both of these have benefits and drawbacks that have to be considered by your quality of work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...asing your based salary but also reduce a upcoming health problem. Moreover, work...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ame organization or different. It still be very personal question for people who w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71621621622 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58344132922 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523648648649 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8800139164 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47904071531 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17959477837 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086449947636 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319829230565 0.151304729494 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468528118229 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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