Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that its better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is often a dichotomy amongst people that whether they should remain an employee in a single company for their whole life or they should move to different working places. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument before reaching a concrete decision.
To commence with, the advocate of the first view argues that employees should work in a similar company throughout their working life because it takes a plethora of efforts and hard work in order to create a reputation in an organization. For instance, it is certainly true that the oldest person in terms of working hours has the quality of being worthy and almost all of the junior staff have to respect him in the organization. Moreover, they also believe that it shows a strong commitment of the employee with the company and in many cases, they are rewarded by a myriad of incentives. For example, one of my uncles is in the same bank from years. He started his job at the age of 24, as a cashier and today, he is 45 years old as an area manager. In addition, for such a strong commitment, the bank has gifted him a brand new car of the latest model which worths a lot.
On the contrary, many support the view that people must change their working places with time. They believe that in order to gain vast experience in their field, it is essential to switch the working environment where interaction with new faces will always help in learning new and working in the same company might have an adverse impact on a worker such as depression. Furthermore, people might also end up losing their interest in the job and eventually they will become less productive. A research conducted by the University of Wollongong reports that just over half of the Australians switch their job to avoid being dull and want to stay productive.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly, there are numerous benefits of working in a similar organization for life such as a high reputation and exceptional incentives. Nevertheless, I strongly opine that people should move to another organization after a certain period of time as it will assist them in gaining quality of experience as well as remain productive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... the quality of being worthy and almost all of the junior staff have to respect him in the...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun support seems to be countable; consider using: 'many supports'.
Suggestion: many supports
...ich worths a lot. On the contrary, many support the view that people must change their ...
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Line 13, column 254, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...to another organization after a certain period of time as it will assist them in gaining quali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in many cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78877005348 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7292445949 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521390374332 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0585998833 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299368331767 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988570300584 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076714314439 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183943297423 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218927738782 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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