Children Over 15 years should be allowed to take their own Decision without any Interference from Their Parents. Do You Agree or Disagree?
It is universally accepted that parenthood is the most significant blessing for the children. It is often said that progenitors should not interfere in their kid's matters if they are adult teenagers. As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree to the statement above because parents can play a vital role for their children and therefore they should be a part of their decision. The following essay will take a look at both sides of the argument.
First and foremost, I believe that a 15 year old child is not enough mature to take his own decisions. This is the age where most of the kids are expecting a lot of care and love from their guardians since they are taking steps in building their careers and one wrong step can lead to the destruction of their future. As evidence, recent research by the government of France has found that children in their country has a high success ration in terms of achieving goals in numerous activities since they took suggestions from their parents before making any commitment. To put it simply, parents are far experienced as compared to the kids and they can assist them in making decisions.
In contrast to this, many support the view that children above 15 years should have a right to live independently. Some people argue that they are capable of choosing their paths owing to technology in the contemporary world which is quite advance that has made them mature enough to decide what is better for their lives. However, others believe that there is a generation gap between the two and consequently, guardians may force them to choose what they might think is suitable for their kids but eventually it is not. To put in other words, children in this age and era are distinguished from their parents in terms of the generation gap, thanks to science and technology.
To recapitulate, people may opine that teenagers can think for the betterment of their lives due to the existing technology, I believe that parents are essential and should be indulged in making decisions by children as they are far more experienced and loyal to their kids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun support seems to be countable; consider using: 'many supports'.
Suggestion: many supports
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, in contrast, in contrast to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79889807163 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67638758215 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517906336088 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2134544888 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308555666642 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110122762448 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602867514229 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197174130855 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272067579815 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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