Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays people believe that working-class employees should work from home instead of going to the office each and every day. Whereas, I believe that there are more advantages of working from than going to work every day. The following in detail explanation can be found below.
On the first hand, this style of working can be very beneficial for the woman who is a mother of young kids. Ladies have to do their job as well as look after their family and kids, which they find very difficult to manage. So looking at all of the points working from home will provide them enough time and rest to see after it. Secondly, In megacities where the population of working people is massive, It will be Economical for both employees and employers because the expense of traveling and maintaining office will be saved.
On the other hand, Humans are told to be social animals. But in these case, the social life of people will change suddenly and they will start showing mental problems. Moreover, Workers working with no physical activity for longer durations can cause laziness and ultimately it will make people physically weak and inactive. For example, during the pandemic situation when the world was working from home, It has found in a survey that a significant amount of people were lazy to do any work and gained unnecessary weight.
To conclude, I would say that, there are more advantages of working from thcomfort rather than traveling every day to a particular place. At the same time, the disadvantages are also a part of it but people can look after it by various means.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79197080292 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48030496682 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6485569309 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335763289381 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120974085927 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103607772201 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216655257276 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668989380475 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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