In some societies, it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports, special diets, or preventative medicine – conventional or alternative. Some people, however, believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays many people are focused on strong health and attractive physical fit intensively. That is why, such people usually go to the gym, visit hospitals taking preventative medicine and apply various diets. Nevertheless, certain part of society claim that to lead a healthy lifestyle is sufficient to get fit and to stay healthy. In my opinion, both options have their reasons to support their logic.
To begin with, it is absolutely natural that people intend to health and beauty including some measurements such as fitness and diet. Moreover, it is the choice of every person and approaches to this issue are also highly individual. Secondly, as popular proverb says:”to prevent is better than to cure”, really, it is better to avoid ailments than then treat them wasting time and money. For example, it is vital to be vaccinated against diseases such as measles, rubella and hepatitis B. Special attention should be paid to children and teenagers because usually their immune system is not ready to fight with insidious infections and viruses. To make matters worse, every missed medical checkup can lead to the aggravation of diseases. For instance, it is better to detect a tumor or other oncologic diseases at the first stage rather at last because timely treatment will be more successful. Finally, there are certain diets which are not just whim of some people but necessity. For example, people with diabetes or predisposition to such disease should follow strict diet in order to maintain the level of sugar in blood. Thus, just balanced food is not appropriate in separate cases.
On the other hand, it is obvious that actions like visiting the gym or usage of organic food during the diet require decent amount of money. So, most likely socially unprotected people cannot allow it. However, instead of expensive procedures people simply can do exercises at home and avoid eating fast food along with harmful habits.
To sum up, both choices have their benefits and the most effective decision could be leading normal life and not to ignore supplementary medicine as well as workouts in the gym and extraordinary diets if it is really necessary.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09243697479 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66276814103 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0448790809 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906806016434 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276159558802 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369578777618 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512156763084 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406979429147 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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