Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
It has been long time since people known any kind of sport as an enjoyable doing for their leisure time. Although many serious accident have occurred, many people do sport as a recreational activity, of course with eliminating of professional athletics. It is healthy for us to do sport continuously, in other word we have to get used to doing sport to will have a more comfortable living in future.
Annually many accidents and incidents are occurred during the sport activity and many people involve in consequence of them. Different events such as leg or hand break, ankle twist, skin scraping and even heart attack in spite of that fact, people attend to such practice and try to enjoy of those. Nowadays many people have sport assurance, why many of them known about the danger of sporting. This method completely protect people again the cost of probably undesired events. This fact produce a more comfortable condition, in other word, make mind of people calm, to have a great time during their activity. In addition.
Hazardous condition of sport can be stand with personal protection equipment, one of more important thing for any individual practice. Generally every activity according to its inherent, has a unique protection equipment. This tools is produced and considered due to different parameters, like the most part of body which are exposed in probably danger, comfort ability of person across the practice. So that everybody need to be equipped before starting to do sport.
On the whole the simplest sport has the individual hazard, but we can tolerate this condition with a specific protection and mitigation and reduce the effect of them and make them more sufferable. Assurance and PPE could be introduced as an effective manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... to will have a more comfortable living in future. Annually many accidents and incidents...
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Suggestion: produces
...of probably undesired events. This fact produce a more comfortable condition, in other ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... a great time during their activity. In addition. Hazardous condition of sport can be s...
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...nique protection equipment. This tools is produced and considered due to differen...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... ability of person across the practice. So that everybody need to be equipped before st...
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Suggestion:
...e equipped before starting to do sport. On the whole the simplest sport has the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in addition, kind of, of course, such as, in spite of, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06551724138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71431883792 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.292810599 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283476580799 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936976118397 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812404236483 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16124342493 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061488741534 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.