Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a great rise in public awareness about the influences of humans on nature. Some assume that the present society should make movements in order to mitigate the stated outcomes, thus could conserve scenes for the succeeding civilisation, while others believe that doing so is superfluous. From my perspective, I strongly concur with the former statement that our generation should act to preserve the ecosystem.
There are many incentives to why prevailing people should start protecting natural habitats. One of the reasons is because environments are usually fragile; meaning that if humans keep manipulating it relentlessly, the landscapes, as a result, will soon be devastated. Hence, our descendants will no longer be able to enjoy these beautiful scenes. Besides, the territories will not only be ruined by individuals but also destroyed by natural catastrophes such as forest fire, or soil erosion, which causes them even more subject to destruction. So, if human beings as a whole do not react to this impending phenomenon, the consequences would be irreversible.
Another reason for which the conservation of environments is necessary would be because humans are the core roots of the degradation of these habitats. Industrial smokes, for instance, charge considerable carbon dioxide gases annually contributing directly to air pollution, which are responsible for the deaths of numerous wild animals. Furthermore, the fast-paced development and constructions of modern buildings for today's demands are increasingly occupying the land areas which used to be sanctuaries or forests.
To reiterate, as the manipulation of people on the natural environments is unexcusable, we should take actions immediately to resolve the issues thus would maintain these habitats for future uses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, while, as for, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63138686131 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18684200401 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671532846715 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2661113123 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147613115042 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486467319946 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392477950694 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896826223004 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329632704543 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.