There has been a significant increase in people moving towards cities leaving their home town because of two main issues which are for employment and for future benefits of children. I believe that solutions to this problem include increasing economy in towns with making of big educational institutions and employment opportunities.
On one hand, problems related to this issue involve people from a low background with no proper annual support to feed their family. In order to search for their needs either for a medical purpose or for educational reasons for their children leaving old people at home in town. These people are separated from the traditions and love and care from parents for personal reasons. It is believed by old people that staying in town provide them with calm and fresh environment. In a report submitted by Russia it is shown that there has been an instant decline in population in town this year.
On the other hand, solutions to this problems include taking instant steps by the government in improving the better productive life in town by providing free land and cattle for people and also making hospitals and educational institutes. For instance, government is providing free land and sheep with schemes such as "Free land" and "300 sheep" to the people of town in Vietnam which made these people to stay in towns and this has shown a considerable improving factor.
In conclusion, as there are several issues which are related to an increase in city's infrastructure by increase in population either by many different reasons must be taken into consideration. Government must take initiative steps by giving schemes and in this way showing the steps taken to people in improving economy through advertisements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22299651568 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84832922914 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8959247413 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.272727273 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206913204292 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871041226295 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309736500024 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133031921157 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285486951866 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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