Space exploration cost tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages of spending money on space exploration?
Technological advancement has become one of the competing races among most advanced countries of the world. Out of many technology researches, space exploration is one, that most governments spend their annual budget on which is more praiseworthy then disgraceful.
To begin with, it is because of the advancement of space technologies, that the globe now has been considered as a village by virtue of which one can exchange information regardless of his or her physical presence. The development of internet is a boon to today's lifestyle. Moreover, it is satellites that has helped to understand earth and its life forms including the universe from distant. Life wouldn’t have become so easy hadn’t this innovation helped predict the past present and future of the earth’s surrounding. For example, prediction of soon approaching disasters has saved millions of lives by alerting to be victims and taking actions pronto.
The flip side of it is that the significant share of citizens tax has been argued to be spend on secondary things like this one where more important aspects of human life such as curing epidemics, fighting poverty and so on should be of priority. For instance, instead of spending large sum of money on space travel and shuttles, developing infrastructures on the ground that would help reduce poverty of the marginalized people. The roadways and hospitals and researches to identify medication to deadly diseases like AIDS, Cancer etc.
To sum up, while there exist drawbacks for prioritizing outer space research, benefits are more as space exploration advancement is making life easier on earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33846153846 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06778450598 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4513512502 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14894189742 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484540996781 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637392334338 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969467223059 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489817829577 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.