In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
An increasing concern for many people around the world is famine. The causes of this worrying trend are numerous and difficult to overcome. This essay will discuss the reasons why it is occurring, and offer some solutions.
There are two main reasons of the insufficient food supply despite various agricultural developments. The primary reason for this is that some remote areas have no access to modern equipment to the advances made in agriculture. As a consequence, farmers in these regions still follow traditional farming methods, resulting in poor productivity. Another cause of this is natural disasters such as drought and flood occur more often due to global warming. In fact, if the climate becomes hotter, it may cause drought in some regions, which makes farming to suffer from crop failure.
However, there are a variety of possible solutions available to address this problem. The main way to combat this issue is by providing financial support to farmers living in the countryside. For instance, the government can raise fund to invest cutting-edge technology in rural areas; therefore, farming productivity is increased. A second potential solution is that the governments and international organizations should educate farmers to tackle devastating impacts of natural disaster. As a result, negative effects of these natural catastrophes are alleviated.
In conclusion, food shortage is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. I believe the best solution is to provide modern equipment to farmers. If these measures are adopted, they will go a long way towards solving the problems caused by famine.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95774982439 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6051752581 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191978890059 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561929698628 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571408450301 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111742410855 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664310493315 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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