the spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalisation produce positive effect for everyone to you agree or disagree
The growth of globalisation as well as International companies increase which are responsible to produce positive effects for every person. I totally agree with this aforementioned statement.
To commence with, there are several positive effects. The first and foremost; increasing technology and innovations. To explain it, in this case, the variance can travel one country to another, because they have enough knowledge about travel related resources and vast use of transportation. Apart from that, International companies also provide job opportunities to alternatives. It also affect to the countries poverty. To epitome, the word work organisation reveals that the poverty decreased by 30% over recent years. As a result, people leave luxuries life as well as an hefty amount of money.
Further, strengthening my view point another positive effect that is one it's become impossible to explore the foreign culture. On the other words, such as, food music, movies, fashion, trend so on. Moreover, we obtain huge amount of knowledge related to art and crafts. For instance, Indian superstars as well as singers get a chance to demonstrate, their skills passion and their creativity in foreign countries. It merely impossible technologies advancement and amazing innovations. Hence, thanks to globalisation due to the fact that, it really helpful for the person and their lives.
To recapitulate, I believe that globalisation and popularity of international companies are beneficial for every individual, due to the reason that, it makes the person's life convenient and easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60165975104 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17000499438 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659751037344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6205792628 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203925750693 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566222967374 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085001720359 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146405944846 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111355202344 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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