Start up your own company or working in a big firm, which is more preferable for post-graduate
After graduating is a vital period in an individual’ s career path. Students have to choose between working as a startup or in a corporate because each type of workplace offers different benefits, but they also pose some tough challenges.
On one hand, if students start their own business, they and their employees would have to perform a number of roles by themselves because there are a few people in the team. This could lead to stress from work and may quickly turn into a high turnover of staff. Besides, due to a limited source of capital, members of startups will not receive a high salary, especially in the embryonic stage; instead, they will learn a lot of experiences since they play different roles to find out what they really want in a long-term career. In addition to such experiences, a startup also provides more flexible hours. Everyone can work from home as long as they can meet the deadline, which allows them to have a short time for travel and other entertainment activities.
On the other hand, large companies with huge financial resources could provide various perquisites for employees. For example, nearly all social insurance fees of workers will be paid by big firms, whereas startups only cover partially. Furthermore, there will be vacation days that employees are permitted to take each year as well as the parties set up for special occasions of the company while being entrepreneurs will not have time for those recreations. The career ladder is also more apparent when working in corporate, which is partly because of the good organizational structure. Nonetheless, the requirements for post-graduates to working in a big company is quite demanding as if their manners are not professional enough or knowledge is just rudimentary, the reputation of the company would be ruined.
In conclusion, each option has both merits and demerits, graduates should consider carefully before making the final decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.121875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90637600533 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628125 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9250689207 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241325970164 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745116208376 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574978381216 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1124168022 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912097709251 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.