Every year, the number of people that suffer the illness that is caused by stress is increasing. This essay will discuss how increased job pressures and family problems can cause stress-related sickness. This essay will also provide some solutions to these problems, including improving work-life balance and changing the lifestyle.
People work under pressure. They have to endure this situation because the workforce recruitment process is a competitive domain. Therefore people, who want to obtain a satisfying job according to their qualification are required to work harder. For instance, most people tend to climb the progress ladder to get a higher position over time. Besides all job pressure, people must take on additional rules in their family lives, which can be stressful. There are a lot of problems that families struggle with, namely financial problems and marital discussions. The combination of increased job pressure and family problems might cause the mentally and physically ill.
Maintaining a work-life balance and changing the lifestyle is both critical to mitigating stress-related illness. People need to realize that work isn't all of the things in their life. The only thing that they need to do is to balance their work and family relationships. For example, many employees burn out from working too much and neglecting family, friends, exercises, and hobbies. Therefore, to reduce work-related stress, people must put a better ratio of work, rest, recreation and family.
Nowadays, the probability of stress-related illnesses is increasing. This essay discussed the two main contributors that cause stressful diseases, namely job pressures and problems related to the family cause stress. This essay put forward two solutions to these problems, including managing a work-life balance and improving the lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57295373665 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92473434641 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6910057759 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171027258414 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06239028139 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646970117108 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130851819249 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741408547825 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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