University education is necessary to get a good job or to do business. It is often argued that who should pay university fees whether it should be a student of society. I disagree with the notion and I have a belief that students and society both have plus points of university education. This essay will further discuss the benefits for individuals and the community, by getting an education.
Firstly let's consider the social effect of higher education. Educated society can take their country towards the development. Take the example of UNITED STATS OF AMERICA, there is nearly 99% of people are well-educated. Because of that, they can do business and also can get a very good job, and when they start business overall, their society or country has a very good amount of products to export to other countries and this trend take their country towards the growth. Another big effect on other people is that they can get good facilities in different fields. The more people study, the more we get professionals (doctors, engineers, accountants, and so on). They can get very good medical facilities.
On the other side, people generally think that after tertiary education students will get high salaries (Doctors, accountants, lawyers, and engineers). The reason for this thinking is if students get a high salary by this study so why should government or other taxpayers pay fees for that students. So this is the first positive effect on individuals that get high wages after getting a degree. This system ( society should pay fees for students) is usable for a minority of students who cannot afford university fees. For instance, in Australia government give facility of loan for students to pay fees, and later, when they get a job and earn a good salary, they repay this loan.
In summary, the modern world is becoming more complex and knowledge is becoming more and more specialized, undoubtedly, education is necessary for both society as well as students but it is impossible to decide whether the society benefits more or individual. So education is beneficial for both so costs should be paid by both of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96358543417 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70022199689 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467787114846 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0337279541 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227367260515 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797024937592 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803672307179 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154362731096 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982317508205 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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