It is often argued that it is more meaningful to choose employment with a high wage even if they do not appeal to at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and I think that job satisfaction is more influential than salary.
First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that, no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience. While pursuing own interest will always bring pleasure and a feeling of satisfaction. For example, a lot of appealing stipends, but because they were passionate about science. That is why it is valuable to assign the kind of job that makes you happy than to look only at the high salary.
Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore leads to career growth. In other terms, there is a strong connection between job satisfaction and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel in their field of work and achieve better results than those who put salaries in the first place. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday job despite a good wage and attempted to become a writer. After some years of ups and downs, he became one of the most famous and well-paid author of the twentieth century. Thus, the advantages of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the drawbacks of a low salary from a long-term perspective.
To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more fundamental than a high salary because it makes people delighted and encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76293757364 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.964250213 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246512189072 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796341163942 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068211951978 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160350094769 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447769508321 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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