It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage even if they does not appeal to at all. I completely disagree with the opinion and I think that job satisfaction is more important than salary.
First of all ,I believe that job satisfaction gives a people a sense of fullfillmen that no money guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and comprimises with his conscience , this person won't enjoy his life. While persueing one's interests will always bring pleasure and fleeing of satisfaction. For example, a lot of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science. That is why it is important to choose the kind of job that makes you happy than to look only at the high salary.
Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore Leeds to a career growth. In other words, there is a strong connection between job satisfaction and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excellent their field of work and achieve better result than those, who put salary on the first place. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday job despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. And after enduring years of ups and downs, he become one of the most famous and well paid author of the twentieth century. Thus, advantages of jobs that keep you satisfied outweight the drawback of a low salary in long-term perspective.
To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary because it makes people happy and motivated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: do
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Suggestion: ,
...nsed and comprimises with his conscience , this person wont enjoy his life. While ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...on wont enjoy his life. While persueing ones interests will always bring pleasure an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rowth. In other words, there is a strong connection between job satisfaction and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83955223881 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6831548736 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.3141737384 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261587044286 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887917484704 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826317155094 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171419207792 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445556119432 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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