Studies show that many criminals have a low of education. For this reason, people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree
Nowadays there is an increase in the rate of crime. it is evident that criminals are getting a low level of education. some people believe that educating criminals can mitigate the crime rate and they can get a job after leaving prison, while others not. I completely agree with the statement, this essay will discuss why educating criminals is more beneficial to society.
educating people in jails have extremely positive benefits to society. The primary benefit is that there will be a decrease in the crime rate as well as an increase in the employment rate. some criminals are adults and they do not know the difference between right and wrong because of no schooling background. so by providing education and proper guidelines, they can be good citizens and can get a proper job to live a happy and respectful life in society.
other than that, in jail, there may be smart and intellectual minds. By providing an education those people can get a chance to find hidden talents in themselves it can be either physical or logical, those criminals who have talents can bring a good name to the country and they can be an inspiration for so many criminal souls. criminals who are educated can be in any field like government, army, scientists, doctors, and even an athlete.
In conclusion, the essay discussed the reasons why criminals need to be educated. there are a lot of benefits to society. they can get a job and there will be a decrease in the crime rate as well as an increase in the employment rate. they can live a happy and respectful life after leaving prison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77173913043 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67329437877 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0988803463 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301189842641 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102628025059 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779994897939 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20544626109 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566747032221 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.