Nowadays, many people think that those who have a large number of valuable assets and money are successful. From my perspective, I do not totally agree with that general thought as there are still other elements acting to measure success. This essay will explain my opinion in more detail and propose a factor required in a person to succeed.
It cannot be denied that opulence has been a ubiquitous measurement of the meaning of triumph in society. That is a reason why a large quantity of individuals work continuously regardless of time and physical bodies in order to adapt to this measure of victory. However, being well-off is not a paramount factor. This is because for some people, they think that having many precious properties cannot decide whether they are triumphant or not. For instance, they may believe that as long as they live healthy and have a family to come back home every day, they are successful with their life in spite of not earning high income.
Moreover, in order to achieve accomplishments, humans need to persist. Tenaciousness is likely to keep people progress and conquer many challenges they may face on the way to success. For example, Zack Ma has been well-known for his journey of being so assiduous practicing English to be successful nowadays. His habit of waking up early and cycling ten kilometers from his house every day just to speak with foreign tourists in his childhood has assisted him to communicate with many global partners in his business so far.
In conclusion, in order to measure attainment, affluence is not the only factor since there are still others to consider, which are based on personal opinions. Additionally, an individual is successful in their life only when he or she perseveres with his or her work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
..., many people think that those who have a large number of valuable assets and money are successfu...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... she perseveres with his or her work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75084633441 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4071373124 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161503384901 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544989016521 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474008389615 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105381764246 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311097593709 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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