Successeful sports pofessionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think this is unfair.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Give reasons and relevant examples.
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh than the disadvantages?
Presently, learning a foreign language by children at primary school it is better rather than secondary school in according to expert. A good introduction but not effective for kids. Surely, I vote for disagree about that. knowing of mother tounge is preferable.
On the one hand, acquaint the strange language will make the progeny can not understand the own language maximally. In times of children's play, as parents the mother tongue is increasingly important and build the reflection of neighborhood than other speechs. For sampling, kids on the development period stay in their country, socialize with local people and study concerning objects around. Automatically, they should to use sectional parlance not other. However, complicated to find identity from their surroundings. they need to be humans who know the environment in which they were born and raised, knowing other introductions to their world.
On the other hand, teaching the terms of overseas in elementary school and get used to using extraneous languages can be easily than when in secondary school. Because in these times, brood can digest well taught everyday from an early age. teaching them will be easier and more efficient than tuition as they are in further education. Awareness other languages as well build children's imagination expand. High curiosity and praise from others.
In conclusion, delay to teach other argot for minors are superiorly inasmuch as vicinal speech be required in the growth times. The opposite, public may decide anything the choice from both of them and get the goals of the action or decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, second, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3203125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7641238864 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.474401499 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1176470588 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106886295893 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302220649912 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262975820657 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058897678238 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321401866281 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.