Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modern society, there is no doubt that there is a huge gap between the rich and the poor. Some people argue that people in certain areas such as sports professionals earn far too much money for their job, while others believe this is certainly fair and totally worth their endless efforts. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument to present a concluding opinion on this.
To begin with, it is arguably true to say the income of sportspeople are much higher than that of a normal person. Specifically, athletes can earn huge awards that may worth up to millions of dollars when winning a race or achieving championship in an important Olympics. Moreover, they are usually specially funded by investors and governmental organizations so that they will be in their best state to bring victory to the national team. These rights, apparently, are superior to normal citizens, making them think that these sports professionals are earning money for the public recognition of the sports industry rather than their contribution to the socitety.
Turning to the other side of the argument, there is some reasonable points in saying that having a huge income is totally fair for athletes. Many sportspeople have to train extremely hard for crucial competitions, and this process can be very challenging and exhausting at times. For example, a swimmer might have to practice a single movement for a whole day to maximize speed and efficiency, or follow strict diets to make sure they remain as healthy as possible. In addition, the number of people who have real talents for sports are very minimal, and these people usually suffer from intense pressure from media and people's expectations; therefore, a high salary can be seen as a compensation for their dedication and the mental problems they may undergo.
In conclusion, sports professionals' income may be far higher than average, but as a matter of fact, it is truly worth their struggle and endless efforts to strive for success. If people put enough passion and hard work into their career, I believe they will soon achieve outstanding rewards and receive even better things in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...money for the public recognition of the sports industry rather than their contribution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01111111111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.712021705 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3914487806 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.769230769 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222550774119 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736246019107 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636725519612 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137155121616 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675899609691 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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