Take a look at the graphic and complete the task The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should spend

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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task.

The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The given table illustrates the proportion of average calories in the United States in the three different periods (1970,1990 and 2010)

In summary, the proportion of calories were increasing in all categories without Dairy and Vegetable. The total of all calories increased over a period of time. Moreover, Fruit provided law calorie compared to the other sources.

According to the table, the total calorie was 2165 in 1970 and it increased and reached 2665 during the sixty years. In 1970, Meat, Eggs and Nuts provided the highest calorie compared to the other sources of calorie, while, Fruit given only 70. After twenty years, the highest calorie was provided by Gains (575); whereas, 260 and 125 calories were given by Dairy and Vegetable respectively.

In 2010, the total calorie increased significantly, but only two sources (Dairy and Vegetable) declined. Added Fat provided higher amount of calorie and it was 640, while, Added Sugar given 460. Fruit provided only 85.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... total of all calories increased over a period of time. Moreover, Fruit provided law calorie c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19620253165 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54197260796 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.8849433503 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111654111924 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546911757293 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554574220965 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902809582092 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056701141385 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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