Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
New technologies change our world and life method like cominucation, jobs, activity, etc. these changes are not always useful and some times we affect from them. Hence people should make balance between their lifestyle and using technologies. In this manuscript, we will be discuss about this issue.
As mentioned above recently high-tech instrument and software change our world and the simplest one of them is television. this device is the first way of cominucation and people can inform about events, learn something, spend their time useful. although some companies show their product in commercial to the people or government can introduce their governors to other people. this aspect of invention of tv is fantastic.
unfortunately some person are addict to the tv and spent most part of the daily life in front of tv. they don't care about tv program. they are only sit in front of tv and watch the programs and change the channels. these group of people don't like do some excersise and spend their energies in a best way. they are coach potato and gain a weight. besides of this problem, these kind of people affect from tv program and their behavior change during the time. Also, they can't do cominucate by other people and be a social person.
overall, each technology like tv has profit and side effect. we should make a balance in our life and don't let them affect on us and try to have healthy and simple life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...are not always useful and some times we affect from them. Hence people should make balance ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ful and some times we affect from them. Hence people should make balance between thei...
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Suggestion: This
...the simplest one of them is television. this device is the first way of cominucation...
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Suggestion: Although
...arn something, spend their time useful. although some companies show their product in co...
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Suggestion: This
...roduce their governors to other people. this aspect of invention of tv is fantastic....
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Suggestion: Unfortunately
...ect of invention of tv is fantastic. unfortunately some person are addict to the tv and sp...
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Suggestion: don't
... of the daily life in front of tv. they dont care about tv program. they are only si...
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...of tv. they dont care about tv program. they are only sit in front of tv and watch t...
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...h the programs and change the channels. these group of people dont like do some excer...
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Suggestion: don't
...nge the channels. these group of people dont like do some excersise and spend their ...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e excersise and spend their energies in a best way. they are coach potato and gai...
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...and spend their energies in a best way. they are coach potato and gain a weight. bes...
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Suggestion: Besides
...hey are coach potato and gain a weight. besides of this problem, these kind of people a...
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Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...gain a weight. besides of this problem, these kind of people affect from tv program and th...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s of this problem, these kind of people affect from tv program and their behavior change du...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...vior change during the time. Also, they cant do cominucate by other people and be a ...
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Suggestion: Overall
...other people and be a social person. overall, each technology like tv has profit and...
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Suggestion: We
...ogy like tv has profit and side effect. we should make a balance in our life and d...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e should make a balance in our life and dont let them affect on us and try to have h...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...a balance in our life and dont let them affect on us and try to have healthy and simple l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82520325203 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47975809536 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4059994349 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8235294118 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125638354891 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405957760752 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419515795818 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785704830187 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231770993811 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.