The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
I have to say that I completely agree with the notion that people copy each other or rather say follow each other. There are people who have different opinions and they try to jump of the league but they are ridiculed by the rest of the majority who believe in copying. It is quite difficult to convince people who keep copying and do not use their head to grasp what is right and what is wrong.
Let me illustrate this by an example, ninety percent people in US use Apple iPhones as their major device. Inspite of the price of the apple iPhone is three to four times more than that of similar specification Android phone. If I reason this phenomenon it is because iphone is not only a phone it is status for people. They think iPhone elevate them as a social creature in the society, that they will considered as high class society. So, even if they can have a Android phone at a lesser price they copy things from rich people to show their status in society.
Though there are some people who decide for themselves as what is suitable to them. But the majority is being played by the society, status and even by psychologically form the TV ads.
Similar trend is very lucid in fashion clothes. Wearables worn by famous models, actror, actress or some renowned personality is exactly copy by the average people as they want to look as good as the celebrities. People follow the celebrities in this case. Let me make it more pellucid by an example. A college girl who is a fanatic of a celebrity she will follow each and every move of that celebrity. From the cosmetics to clothes to even the inner wear she will follow the celebrity devoutely. If this college girl is the queen bee of the college, rest of the girl will follow her the same to look pretty and beautiful inspite of the fashion suits them or not or they can afford it or no. They will follow. Again, not all follow this trend but the majority do follow it.
I have explained the this nature by two examples their can be some other examples and people may not find my opinions justifies but yes nature of copying one another is easily visible in human beings in hunger of their status and look attractive which is quite normal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4504950495 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31767776715 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.003035632 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107797763041 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304632395242 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385707305452 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680762942439 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399129597159 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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